Posted by: sherif95 | October 30, 2010

Halloween Story

When The Day Comes
Hi, my name is Jack and I am going to tell you a very creepy story. There in a very dark place lived an old woman with her husband and her dog called Trousy. The woman was Margaret Jooke, but the old man I don’t really remember his name, but he was very old and I always hear him coughing, and he was very sick and had diabetes.
This family was very unfortunate because every year on Halloween one of their family members dies. The woman knew this already and she was very sad because last year her daughter Kathy died from a very hard choke. Her husband says that she was holding her throat very hard and she couldn’t breathe and suddenly she died.
Fredrick her only son was an unmarried man that lived alone in his house in Townsville far away from his mother. He hated his mother and didn’t even think about her and every night he go to pubs and drink a lot and he even get drunk, and the last time he went to the doctor he told him take care because drinking too much will be very dangerous for you. Fredrick just didn’t care what the doctor said and he even drank more.
The old lady every day she prayed to god from her heart and she read in the bible and really loved god. She tried not to make god mad and god always help her and stays beside her and never leaves her alone. She was very kind and she really wanted her son to change and become a better person.
All people believe that this woman is a priest because what she wanted actually happened. Many people come to her house from many countries so she can pray with them and they tell her their problems and she can help them because the people knew that god really loved her.
One creepy night, there was lightning and thunder storm and it was raining very hard. The woman took her dog and went to the pharmacy like two blocks away from their house because they were out of medicine for her husband and her husband was almost dying, so she asked a kind woman to stay with him until she goes and buy the medicine with him. The woman didn’t mind at all, but the dog kept on barking on that woman like his feeling said that she isn’t safe.
Margaret then grabbed the dog and ran to the pharmacy, but the dog didn’t want to move he was totally inert and had the feelings of something wrong is going to happen. Margaret just ignored and pulled the dog hard, so he can go with her.
When Margaret arrived she found the pharmacy closed. She felt very sad, and the dog kept on barking at her to tell her lets go home it is not safe here. Margaret kept on shouting for help, but then once there was silence and all of the sudden she heard the sound of the broken glass. The woman began to freak and she was terrified she didn’t know what to do she couldn’t even think all she did is said god please help me on her tongue every time she felt scared.
Margaret couldn’t go back without the medicine, so she ran and kept on running, but then when she looked behind her she couldn’t even find her dog. She kept on calling for him Trousy…Trousy…Trousy. Margaret then saw a grotesque looking person from very far away passing the road. All the lights of the road were closed and the woman kept on thinking until she fell unconscious on the ground.
Then she dreamed that she was on a river sitting, and came an old man and told her “live as the life leads you and don’t say to life why.” Then suddenly she woke up and found herself having the ability to fight. Then she ran and found a big house that said on it FOR YOUR HELP. The woman couldn’t believe.
She went inside and sat and then a very old man stayed beside her and was crying. She asked him what is the problem, but then he just didn’t answer. She kept on asking for help and asked for the medicine, fortunately the man heard her and went to give her the medicine she thanked him a lot and returned home.
When she opened the door she found blood on the floor, and she was very scared she kept on breathing hardly. Then she went inside to check for her husband, but she found him dead in the bed and the blood was all over the bed, and she couldn’t find the woman that she told her to stay with her husband, and when she approached to the calendar she found that it was October 31st. She said to herself oh my god!
Then she heard a dripping voice she was paying attention to where the voice came from. She looked in the kitchen but she couldn’t find anything then she approached from the bathroom and she heard the voice louder and louder drip…drip…drip. She went inside and stared……..She found the dog hanged from its tail with his blood dripping. She screamed very hard, but she learned her lesson. Never depend on someone you don’t know.


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  1. Nice story Sherif! A moral at the end too!


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