Posted by: sherif95 | October 16, 2010

Historical Fiction

The War
In 1970 I was a man in the army force in Egypt. I lived in Cairo for my whole life. I had many cousins that died in a war when they were fighting, but I was different the president Anwar Sadat really liked me and knew that I had a talent in wars. He rewarded me for being the best soldier and I really like him. Also I traveled with him many places and I protected him from any danger. Then, came our worst enemy Israel and stayed in Sinai and kept on bothering us, and we already had many problems so we didn’t need somebody to bother us. We heard many people died and many people were in danger so I got a group of army and went to kill the enemy, but we couldn’t and we lost many people. Later, that day I went to the president and asked him what are we going to do? He told me to wait and god will solve all the problems. He was a very nice president and he wasn’t selfish to anyone at all he liked everyone even if anyone hates him. He always pray to go and he was a very good man, the president and I kept on thinking what we are going to do. The next year in April 1972, the president had a good idea his idea was that one day we are going to get war planes and many soldiers and many panzers and also many good weapons and we are going to attack them while they are sleeping. I kept on thinking about this idea first until I was persuaded with this idea and I liked it a lot and even if I didn’t like it he is the president and what he says must happen. I told all the army, and they also liked this idea, but there was a problem. That, where are we going to get all the weapons and even if we get all the weapons are they going to be good? Sadat was very comfortable because his best friend lives in Russia and Russia has the best weapons in the world, so he asked him to get some weapons when he comes. There was another problem that the president had a dangerous virus and went to the hospital and sat there for a month. After the president had come out of the hospital we were all happy and we made a big party and celebrated him, but even he is still tired and he doesn’t feel well. We were all worried because we thought that the plan won’t work if he is sick. We kept on waiting until June 1973 when we were surprised to see the president came up and stood. I said let’s not wait and go directly to get the victory, but the president said let’s wait to plan where the soldiers are going to go and he kept on putting the army in groups and he made 20 groups and each group has 500 soldier. We waited and waited until 3 October 1973 and we waited hours until the president said we are going to move the army in 5th of October in the midnight and by 6th of October we would be fighting and on our way to victory. We stayed fighting until 25th of October which we claim victory. This was my story with the third president of Egypt and how I was a hero.

Posted by: sherif95 | October 2, 2010

Irony

The Big Secret
The story I wrote is about an autistic boy called Daniel, he used to live with his parents Foster and Sara. This boy can see things that other people cannot see like he can read codes and passwords besides he loves to do puzzles and he can even make them very fast. A murderer company that has a code for killing people once they write this code on the machine they have someone dies. Everyone was upset and didn’t know what to do. Daniel’s parent’s died from this code when he was a baby and a man who works in the police called Robert Hooke took him to stay with him. Both of them loved each other the Robert and Daniel. Robert didn’t recognize about how the boy was special and had a talent of seeing things other people cannot see. Everyday Robert goes to his work and leaves the boy alone in the house and when he comes he finds strange things happen but he doesn’t understand it. Robert knows everything about the machine and knows that Daniel’s parents died from this machine, but he couldn’t do anything because he must know the code to find their place and can go and arrest them. Later on many people die and the police can’t do anything and they started worrying about themselves. Once there was a meeting to Robert Hooke’s house, so they could talk about what they could do to this company. A man in the meeting recognized the boy but couldn’t really remember where he had seen him. The meeting continued and the boy went in his room and starting thinking of what he could do then he saw old puzzles that had been years on this shelf and no one had been using it. The boy started to do these puzzles and he finished them in less than five minutes, the puzzle itself is two hundred pieces and then he went to sleep. After the meeting was done the man asks Robert about the boy that he have, Robert told him everything about the boy, the man was so sad for the boy’s miserable life and he asked Robert to go in and see that boy, so they both went in and they saw something that made them very shocked Robert saw all the puzzles that he had and he almost was going to throw them away they were done neatly. Robert said something is strange with that boy that I wish to understand. The man kept on thinking where had he saw him before as he remembered he kept it a secret to himself so that Robert doesn’t faint. He knew everything about this boy and he was so happy that he found him. He just said to Robert that he knew his parent’s well and they were really friends with them and he said in his mind she told me everything about him. The man asked Robert to take the boy just two days Robert accepted and he took him. The next day the boy woke up finding himself in a different house and different people he was so scared and was screaming and crying. A man comes in and gave him the code and told him can you read this please. The boy said loudly “The place is in Cannibal road and the meeting point at 12:00 midnight the man was so happy to know that the problem was solved. The man called all his team even Robert and told him that he knew the place and then they all went to this place at the time that was written and they arrested all the people that were there. Later on, Robert took good care of Daniel and he honoured him by putting him in an autistic school that really helped him and the boy hugged Robert and told him I love you and everyone was surprised to know that this 9 year old boy saved the whole United States.

Posted by: sherif95 | September 24, 2010

The Walk

I started my walk with the first thing I heard the supervisors shouting and the phone ringing and also I saw a long red carpet in the hall way and then reconized people walking in the stairs then I touched the wall and then later on I heard foot stamps on the stairs. The next floor I saw different classes and I saw many teachers and I said hi to them. In the next floor we passed by and we saw two students and we also passed by Dr. Sanaa office and we saw her talking in the phone and finally we went to the playground and we saw kids playing in the playground playing football and they actually had sports. This was was really helpful and it was so useful for us.
By: Sherif Mahfouz

Posted by: sherif95 | September 20, 2010

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